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November 19, 2012
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+ Ready to fight + by taka-maple + Ready to fight + by taka-maple
Commission for :icontakumi-ito:
Finally got it done |'D
Sorry also
I couldn't find the note you sent about the specifics, but I hope this is alright ;n;

My commission prices!
(Money preferred)

:bulletyellow:Full body (colored) : 480 :points: (6$)
:bulletyellow:Full body (lineart) : 400 :points: (5$)
:bulletyellow:Full body (sketch) : 160 :points: (2$)
(Backgrounds to any of these are 80 points extra) (1$ EXTRA)

:bulletyellow:Waist up ( colored) : 400 :points: (5$)
:bulletyellow:Waist up ( Lineart & Sketch ) :320 :points: (4$)
(Backgrounds are 80 points extra) 1$ Extra)
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this is without a doubt a true work of art! the style being used in this drawing is so very unique. im a very big fan of your work. the emotion shown on the characters face is that of disagrement as if he's being forced to fight. i love it! i dont know the story behind this character but it seems like it would be interesting. the detail within the body and clothes are very good. far beyond amateur skills. you have the makings of a professional artist. anyways, this work is astounding. the originality is outstanding! the techinique is breathtaking. the impact is at its best! keep up the good work!
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Your anatomy is really good and also is the clothing.
The Details in the clothing, the folding just great!

The nebulous white space blends out the things in the background effective an draws the focus to the main part of the picture.

The pose is working out perfectly and very oratorical.

Your coloring is... i dont want to say sloppy... just inconsistent.
You did good as you do the folds in his pants but sometimes the shading appears to be random and lazy like you where not aware of the lightsource.

Also the handle and sheath of the sword are low on details, i can not guess which material it is.

The many white lines let all materials look glossy and shiny which looks unfitting sometimes.

It looks a bit odd how the hair is blending in the head because the hard outlines dont support this effect.

But there is one thing that you really have to explain.
Is there a sixth finger on his hand?
You should be carefull with such things, they can blast the whole picture!

In the End i can say that this picture is full of expression and very dynamic!
Your anatomy skills are very advanced.
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LunascapeStudios Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I wish I could draw guys like!!
Takumi-Ito Nov 22, 2012
ahmahgahddfhfgjvbvs, haven't checked back for a few days and I end up missing this!
That's incredible! I love it. :3

Thanks so much!
taka-maple Nov 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You're very welcome!
Wroezzz Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks great, I really like how you did the clothes, great work ^^
Schmoebe Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i am so done with your talent o m g
Why are you literally perfect

no but really
This looks amazing!
I love how much you've improved since I met you! ; o ;
Pssh even like since last year or two years ago you've improved so much |D
taka-maple Nov 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you Jessica ;;
Schmoebe Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem!! ; w ;<33
oipster Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OMG so goooood ;A; <3333333333
Uhuhuhu , this is amazing :iconpapmingplz: <333
leon52827 Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i'd like to do the critique if you would allow me too. feel free to see my other critiques on my profile page.
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